Weaving Cycle (Crown of Shakesp.sonnets) (Revision)
Weaving Cycle (Crown of Shakespearean sonnets) RevisionLeny Roovers24-7-2004IThe loom is set for yet another weave,the coloured threads laid out, the shuttle waits;within the womb of time small seeds...
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Wow.. to say I'm impressed is an understatement. This is one of the best Sonnet Crowns (Corona's) I've read, Leny. Each one is perfect!I love the metaphors of birth you use throughout, and the...
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Another impressive Crown Leny and I mean impressive to the extent of replacing the existing one that you did in the Sonnet Part 1. I am loath to really because of the variety of Italian forms you...
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I read this first,and returned to quote(so to speak) my fav. lines!!Each one so detailed,so excellent, I'd haveto repost the entire piece!!Fabulous job and a piece to be proud of!!
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Hi Bruce,thanks for taking the time to read all this! There are still a few spots I'm not happy with, so feel free to point them out, should you wish so. After three days with this on my mind, I just...
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Hello T,Thank you for reading this so early in your morning! I have indeed been thinking of doing this in different sonnet forms, but my mind apparently was so Shakespearean, that I forgot... Glad you...
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Hello Myst?Thank you for reading and your kind comments re this one.It felt a bit like a delivery... after posting!with a smile,Leny
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Leny, You out did yourself with this one. Bravo! I loved your comparisons using the loom and weaving from the beginning to the end to show a life cycle. Just Beautiful!Lorraine
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Hello Lorraine,Thank you for taking the time to read this long one and the nice comments. I have to take a little distance from it and then I can better see how to smoothen the rough spots and iambic...
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Hello Paganini,No need! Thank you for reading, I do appreciate it.Leny
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Leny, I give you so much credit for this very beautiful thought within this piece.Lorraine
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